[영상 피드백]
My husband and I don't like baseball, was bored 이 문장은 구어체로는 상관 없지만 차라리 Since we don't like baseball that much, it was boring to us 이렇게 써주면 어땠을까 싶네요~
I traveled domestic trip은 여행이 자꾸 겹치는 느낌이라 I go on a domestic trip 이라고 하는게 좋아보입니다!
as well 크으~ 좋다!
이제 보통 3분이 나오네요? 아주 멋지게 해내고 있습니다
잘하셨습니다~ 남옥!
[예문 피드백]
I'm thinking of start new business.
-> thinking of starting이라고 해주기!
That must have a good idea.
-> You must 가 낫겠는데요~?
나머진 좋습니다!
